Urban mobility it is one of the most discussed topics nowadays, since the great metropolises of the world and Brazil face serious problems arising from displacement in cities.
It is for this reason that this subject has a high probability of being an essay theme for Enem and any other entrance exam or contest.
1. Understand the concept of urban mobility
Roughly speaking, we can define urban mobility:
“Concept that involves the displacement made in urban spaces. ”
Of course, the definition given above is a small sample of the concept, which at the same time involves taking the time to carry out daily activities in a safe and healthy way.
2. Do research and data collection
Before writing about the topic, we must first deepen our knowledge of this concept. So, it's important to show that you know what you're going to talk about.
You need to prove that you read, that you watch news, in short, that your knowledge is capable of covering different aspects of the topic, whether historical, geographical, etc.
In this case, it is important to research the concept, collect current data on the internet, in newspapers and, if necessary, talk to someone "in the know" about current issues.
3. Gather arguments on the topic
In this very important part of text development we have to think about the causes and consequences of urban mobility in the short and long term in Brazil and in the world.
It is worth keeping in mind some concrete examples to use, such as urban mobility in Rio de Janeiro and São Paulo. And, on the other hand, researching some cities in the world that are good examples of sustainable and healthy urban mobility for citizens.
From there, we can start thinking about the argument we will use:
1. “Why has urban mobility become one of society's greatest challenges?”
Urban mobility is something that requires special planning, as population growth increasingly requires a solution that is able to meet the number of people who need to commute daily, quickly, safely and healthy.
For a long time, the means of transport have not been enough to take workers to their jobs, students for schools, people in general for their commitments or activities of leisure.
In addition to not being enough, the places where they can be caught often force people to take long distances on foot or leave the house very early, taking into account the frequency with which pass. In either case, it is also necessary to assess the safety of these routes.
Furthermore, in order not to go through certain jams on crowded buses, for example, those who can prefer to take their own means of transport.
More comfortable, the car allows, in a way, to go out at chosen times, as well as transport what you want.
It turns out that the number of cars has become so large that the streets are no longer able to accommodate everyone in the so-called "peak hours".
This happened due to several factors, not only for the convenience, but the credit facilities allowed many people to buy cars.
2. "What are the consequences of urban mobility?"
Every day in the morning and at the end of the day, traffic is critical. People waste a lot of time in traffic jams, time that could be spent more productively and less stressful.
Thus, together with the loss of time and quality of life, we still have the environmental damage resulting from vehicle pollution.
The problem reached such proportions that what was apparently a great solution ceased to be once people managed to get around the car rotation. This was a proposal from the city of São Paulo that only allows certain enrollments to circulate according to the days of the week.
So as not to get caught up in those days, whoever could, bought a second car to escape the rotation.
3. "Is there a solution to the problem of urban mobility?"
You must present viable proposals that, above all, respect human rights.
It is not worth saying that if the problem is lack of road space, this will be solved with expropriations or deforestation. In this case, not only would it not be a solution, but other problems, mainly housing and environmental problems, would aggravate.
Admittedly, planning is essential, and you should mention this: create bike lanes and keep them in good condition, create more bus lanes.
But you can also propose awareness campaigns using social media. How about proposing to use a bicycle on days whose forecast indicates pleasant weather? Or, then, motivate people to take turns hitchhiking to work or school?
4. It's time to write!
One essay-argumentative text, which is the textual genre used in Enem's essays, must present personal opinions, as well as a proposal for intervention.
In addition to all of the above, pay close attention to text structure and errors!
Therefore, your text should be divided as follows:
- 25% for the introduction
- 50% for the development
- 25% for the conclusion
And finally, the production of the text must be careful. It is not enough to know a lot about what is said and neglect formal writing and aspects of cohesion, coherence, orthography.
Slowly read everything you've written and don't let spelling and punctuation errors pass you by.
Tips for writing a 1000+ essay on Enem
We have gathered below some tips for you to achieve the maximum score on Enem
- Know the proposed theme well;
- Don't run away from the subject;
- Carefully read the motivational texts offered;
- Write according to the type of text proposed (dissertation-argumentative)
- Make an outline, a summary of what you want to talk about;
- Pay attention to spelling and syntax errors;
- Do a final review.
Observation: You can create a brilliant headline, but remember that the headline is optional and therefore not rated by the jury.
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